I liked this text. to be honest i'm a lil disapointed cuz the topic is really good and i'm glad you had the desire to write it. for i am like u. i think to myself what can we do?? for it would be so easy to give some of our stuff but it's never that easy unfortunately which is crazy btw. anyways it's not a 5/5 cuz well... this isn't really a poem is it?