by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Haha. i loved that. the energy and happiness of the poem really rubbed off onto me. |
by Vanessa
I think it is wonderful that you try new things. I really like this style, and the postive energy that came fronm it. Really well written, only thing that I thought you should add, it a note at the bottom describing this style of poety, since most people aren't going to understand it. other than that is is perfect, and I see no room for improvement. |
by Georgi
Aww lovely description ib this my darling |
by claire
I love this poem - the format, and the way it perfectly captures most parties. |
by Goran Rahim
Hahahaha, isnt parties make you to forget whatever is going on in our daily life. |
by RetroRavey
That's a pretty neat style of poetry. It's really differnent. 5/5 |
Hm. |
Hey, |
by Cody r
Itis good. i have never heard this kind of poem before. some of the lines were not 9 syllables. some were ten |
by Wallace
Nice form of poetry never seen it before. |
by hani
Hi |