This is a really strong poem, Brittany. It's short, but says a lot.
I know your brother is at war, so writing about this must have meant a lot for you.
Take care.x

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WOW that was a very powerful poem, loved it ,great write, and wording was good , good job , keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Wow , you should like send this to hallmark for people who want to send their loved ones in the war saomething, or send it to a program thatll send it to them... this is really good, and any soldier would be soo proud of you for writting this,
beautifully written
<3 ang