Mourn (for the last time)

by NeferNoir   Jun 12, 2007


Photographs with stitches,
I hold in my heart.
The fears taste like acid,
smiles torn apart.
Ruined.
Burned.

Legends with bloodshed,
echo broken deaths.
Running from salvation,
stopping to take breaths.
Harmed.
Damaged.

Black liquid fears,
hardened my soul.
I reached the secret gate,
embraced by the ghoul.
Cursed.
Confused.

Thorns down my throat,
I wail in pain.
Bleeding inside, I cry.
I try to scream again.
Hopeless.
Helpless.

My eyes only see destruction,
sacrificed my soul to save Death.
Don't shed tears for me.
Mourn.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very nice... it was very dark... :) I liked how you put those 2 words after each stanza it really empacts the reader :D You did a really great job at this I liked this part the best:

    Legends with bloodshed,
    echo broken deaths.

    Harmed.
    Damaged.

    I just went like... whoa

    Great Job
    5/5

    `` by the way thanks for the comment :)

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I always love your poetry because it flows so well off the tounge and it is always so well written. It comes from the soul and deep within the heart. You have an awesome writing style. 5/5 seems inadequate. Thank you for the comment, there will be more as soon as I can find time to write. Awesome job!!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by gless

    The best dark poem I have read so far. Gd work. Last stanza is very good.

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