The best dark poem I have read so far. Gd work. Last stanza is very good.

I always love your poetry because it flows so well off the tounge and it is always so well written. It comes from the soul and deep within the heart. You have an awesome writing style. 5/5 seems inadequate. Thank you for the comment, there will be more as soon as I can find time to write. Awesome job!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Very nice... it was very dark... :) I liked how you put those 2 words after each stanza it really empacts the reader :D You did a really great job at this I liked this part the best:

Legends with bloodshed,
echo broken deaths.

Harmed.
Damaged.

I just went like... whoa

Great Job
5/5

`` by the way thanks for the comment :)