Comments : Traveler

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis another great poem jenna, love the flow, the story is excellent, i give it a 5/5 as always!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I think the story was very nice, very heartfelt and sad. You used excellent rhyming, and it didn't sound forced at all. The flow was very nice, and the small piece of dialogue really made the story and the poem.