Moises.... RIP

by Michelle   Jun 12, 2007


Moises Enrique Villalta

M aybe it was for the best
O r maybe it was your time to rest
I t is still hard to bare
S eeing you in the casket its not fair
E motions run deep in my soul
S eeing you gone unable to hold

E nough is enough I cant take no more
N ot able to think standing at the door
R emembering all we been though
I nstead all I could do is look at you
Q uite just laying there lifeless
U nable to move I cant see you like this
E mpty is what I am... to you I go kiss

V anished... your gone... my lips so cold
I now no real pain... Bleeding from my soul
L ife will go on...
L ong after everyones gone
A big peace of my heart went in the ground
L ifting my prayers as you go down
T aking time to tell you how much you mean to me
A nd to wait for us, cuz in heaven is soon where will be!

-Michelle June 11 07'

<< Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title MOISES ENRIQUE VILLALTA which is the full name of my big brother may he Rest In Paradise >>

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  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Crissman

    Great poem I really like how you made it acrostic, that was really unique. I'm sorry for your loss and know how you feel. I lost my daughter and almost lost my son and wife to a drunk driver. Hang in there, one thing I do to help deal with everything is write poems about my feeling and what happened. I think it really helps since I'm not open to talking to people about everything.
    Thanks for your comments.

  • 16 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    I like how you ryhmed and did it acrostic.

    I really did pick up that vibe of loss. I hope your brother will rest in peace, I'm sure he was a fine young man. =/

    I'd also like to say, thankyou for your comment on ;Bandersnatch' it's quite old and not my best work, but thanks for the interest and your opinion. :3

  • 17 years ago

    by Munequita

    God i feel for you cause im on the same boat..i lost my cousin in he was only 15 so it's so weird and confusin but ur poem made me cry....lol but im ok....i love it....dis is like a 100/5

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