God i feel for you cause im on the same boat..i lost my cousin in he was only 15 so it's so weird and confusin but ur poem made me cry....lol but im ok....i love it....dis is like a 100/5

I like how you ryhmed and did it acrostic.

I really did pick up that vibe of loss. I hope your brother will rest in peace, I'm sure he was a fine young man. =/

I'd also like to say, thankyou for your comment on ;Bandersnatch' it's quite old and not my best work, but thanks for the interest and your opinion. :3

Great poem I really like how you made it acrostic, that was really unique. I'm sorry for your loss and know how you feel. I lost my daughter and almost lost my son and wife to a drunk driver. Hang in there, one thing I do to help deal with everything is write poems about my feeling and what happened. I think it really helps since I'm not open to talking to people about everything.
Thanks for your comments.