by Gamaliel munoz Jun 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I feel empty |
Good poem i think the spelling/grammer needs a little work but other than that its really gud!! its full of emotion and feeling |
This one was really great =) You got the point and the feelings across so good =) The flow was a little hard to find at first but after I found it...Wow lols Your choice of words was really great on this one also =) 5/5 =D |