Oh i do love how you have wrote this poem. it is very unique and magical. well done. this has a high ammount of skill and dedication woven into it. well done.

5/5 David

It took me ages to understand that! But it was cool, very clever!! Ive never seen an acrostic done like that, with the whole reflection thing, that was aweomse =] I liked it a lot.
Take care,
Geo
xoxoxo

That was diffrent, and diffrent is good, I really like the reflection part, the word choice was excellent, and the it kept my instrest, really great poem 5/5

A very intresting way of writing an acrostic. Doing a reflection. A reflection of words. It was really unique and rather enjoyable. It must of been hard to write asd each line is also reflected creating this sense that your words have to make sense both ways. It seems really chlanging and it seems you did a great job on the poem. I respect you for doing this as it seems really hard. You pulled it off ownderfully as you had many words disxcribing it and your reflection creas this different meaning with the exact same words. I lvoed it. A brillaint job... and i want to try and write one of tehse now. To improve try using varied punctuation? Keep it up though. xx

I loved it. it was very intrigueing, i thought it was great. the wording was excellent, the way you chose the words was just great, all in all. a perfect acrostic poem. 5/5

Fsams this is true hard work I am sure. Very well written indeed. U deserve 5/5

Another wonderful poem. I have written one like it before... I know how they can be complicated trying to get it to make sense.
Lovely work.
5/5

Great work...vary unique i dont think iv reaqd one like this i like it...5/5

LimeGreenShadowsOnTheWall

Superb dear its simply superb. I know how much effort is needed to write such a poem. great

Interesting poem, well written.
Good choice of words, and I like the form you used.
Keep up! 5/5

This was different I get the Reflection bit and I understand how Its an acrostc what I dont get though is there is no acrostic part in the 2nd reflection so how is it an actual reflection lol im so lost please PM and explain how if you get me. None the less an interesting read.~mel

Hmm... unique style, works well. i like it!

Again a very well thought out poem. I like this style of poems really good job xxx alex xxx