I love this poem
loved the qwhole thing especially

'Blood on the floor,
final rebellion,
before no more.'

and

with nothing left,
except dead eyes
no one there,
except my friend,
death.

AND

Your tears slowly turned red,
but noone seems to care,
you scream of death,
and they all cheer.

5/5

I lik i like ... what can i say but it was bloddy awesome

Very very powerful...i loved this one....you're a very talented writer