Comments : Innocence, Thine Eyes Entrance

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The innocence of the soul can be reached through the very eyes in which see with. This is a wonderful piece of work thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Your poems always touch my heart. This one is so beautiful.

    Innocence, Thine eyes entrance
    Bewitching with your solemn glance
    Reckless beams of light invade
    A soul that stands alone... afraid.

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Great job !
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So beautiful.......love the feel and rhythm of the whole piece....

    Innocence, Thine eyes entrance
    Bewitching with your solemn glance
    Reckless beams of light invade
    A soul that stands alone... afraid.

    ^awesome verse....Take care, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Hi
    very nice and beautiful good work keep it up 5/5 .
    and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
    hani