Comments : When you, Cause you, How you,,,

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    :( Ohh this is so sad... I can definitely relate to feeling like this. And although that feeling may suck horribly, you portrayed it beautifully. Keep up the great writing, bud.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sad poem.
    That feeling sucks.
    It's full of emotions and has a good imagery.
    Sorry, you had that feeling.
    Anyway, a beautiful poem.
    You take care