I am sure this is one of the best poems i have ever read.......it told a beautiful story (although it was sad) and the words rhymed and fit together just like a puzzle....i loved it...and i'll be reading more too.......and i can say truthfully that i relate so much..it was like u were writing that poem for me....b/c it was so like me........i enjoyed it..plz check out my poems sometime and give me any tips.........they're much appreciated.....miranda (randii)