My Last Farewell

by Marc Ortiz   Jun 12, 2007


It was not long ago when she was safe here in my heart
But now she's a thousand miles away from me..
I can never reach her up in the sky
And she'll never look down to where I am. (In Hell's prison)

Even though I scream with all my strength
She'll never hear my last farewell..
Even though my heart weeps in agony
She'll never see the beauty inside me..

I tried to runaway from my problems..
But each place I hide, it only reminds me of her..
Every night when I close my eyes,
There's a blissful delusion of me and her.

But I am nobody in her eyes
not even an insect to her..
Our laughter and sorrow is just a memory..
Fading slowly as time passes by..

And now my tears is like the river Nile
But she's too blind to see that I am crying..
She promised to me, "I'll be there for you when you're down."
But that will never happen even if I'll end my life..

I was always alone in the shadowy corner
Afraid that she will laugh at my failures..
But I tried my best to go back into the light
Yet still I failed.. I'm still a loser to her sight..

This will be my last farewell for you my angel..
I will always and forever love you with all my heart..
"Your love is engraved in my heart, its just beside
The scar you gave me when you broke my heart.."

*It's not good.. I wrote this from my heart.. I'm really down at the moment.. And I need to write it down..*

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  • 15 years ago

    by ASHLEY BROOM

    This was a GREAT poem and from the heart...............Keep it up............Your great........

  • 15 years ago

    by mikaella

    I liked this alot it was very touching and it brought tears to my eyes ur a talented person! lol don't forget to return the favor I just wrote a new poem but it sucks i just was upset it's "It Was Never YOu It was Always Me" it is really not a great poem but i hoped someone could help me understand my own thoughts....

  • 16 years ago

    by likethewind

    Wow. its great. although, i must admit, there were things that could have been changed. but it came from your heart.

    to be truthful, the flow was good, the rhyme scheme confused me a little. but i hardly noticed. the emotion in it is amazing.

    i would say there was a certain part that i liked, but there were to many that were amazing.

    great poem. 5/5 keep it up.

    ~LoRa

  • 16 years ago

    by Its a love story

    Awww....this is really emotional and sad. if you need anyone to talk to i am here....i am a great listener...

    private message me if you want...and please r/r/c one of my poems please?

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Very sad. But full of emotions, greatly portrayed through your great choice of words. Your descriptions were great and the beginning really drew me in and held until the end. A well deserved 5/5. :]

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