by Espoirfailed Jun 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A bridge that's burning |
by Solus
It seems life is all about watching things burn. |
This is the second poem of yours that I've read and I must say your poems are captivating. The stories you mix into them are breathtaking and you tell them with a very clever vocabulary. The flow was pleasant and truly picked up towards the end, it's the same with the rhyme. Well written, organized and the title was a real eye catcher. Keep up your talent and never look down. |