This is a sad poem i feel you are a very talented writer keep up the good work please read some of my sad poems if you could 5/5.

U have a natural talent for putting thoughts on to papaer..and yu did it so well in this poem...even though its sad i could feel the emotions and meanings runnign through it:D
keep up the gr8 writes
never stop writing!
tk care
bree

Wow powerful write
i liked it alot
keep it up!