This is sad but beautifully written. I like it a lot. Thanks for the comment :]
-Rachel

That was really sad.

Wow! you've done an amazing job with this one =]]. The flow is wonderful and excellent choice of words! great job! & thanx for the comment

I just read these poems and think no, no, no its so wrong someone went through this. Your poems always evoke such emotions that they must be so painful to remember and write about. Glad you do though, your poems are brilliant and i imagine give a little hope to anyone suffering. Such a sad poem that shows how all bullies are cowards. Excellent piece.

Kelly
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Being gay and suffering depression sometimes I feel a little persecuted or self pity. Then I talk to an old man who had his arm blown off in Korea (but is still positive), and see your posts about your abusive experience. I know you must have scares.... but there you are trying to help others and it just lifts me, Thankyou.
Nice Poem 5/5

This poem is excellently written. It is very touching and you expressed emotions greatly. You created strong atmosphere and this poem is so sad. It truly deserves 5/5