by The Angel of Secrets Jun 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
If I could chose, I'd stay here forever. |
by Tammie
There is such truth in this poem, hun. I love it. The flow was flawless and the rhyming didn't sound forced at all. The descriptiveness and the way you wrote this created clear imagery in my mind, with a poweful and true ending. A well penned poem. Well done. =] 5/5 |