Wow, again, way different than anything I've read, but it was great, I loved the description and the vocab. was brilliant, Lots of imagery, :D I loved it! Beautiful!

Wow I love this. It's unique and intreguing. The descriptive words created great imagery and the flow was perfect. The use of vocab was great and the ending was very good. The title made me want to read this, so a good choice there, tieing in well with the poem. 5/5 Definately.

Tammie