by bleeding limegrenn Jun 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A little girl thought she found love in a boy |
by Sarah
Poems great, so sad |
Good poem. fix the mistakes and it'll be perfect |
by Tricky Daze
It was an interesting story and pretty much real |
by Kalee
This is a good poem. It needs a bit of fixing up in places but it is still good. 'to droned her sorrow' should be 'to drown her sorrow. i think appart from that it is a well written sad poem. 5/5 |