This is a good poem. It needs a bit of fixing up in places but it is still good. 'to droned her sorrow' should be 'to drown her sorrow. i think appart from that it is a well written sad poem. 5/5

Kalee

It was an interesting story and pretty much real
And I would like to help about something
away-way
But I liked the sorrow here
Good job,
laura

Good poem. fix the mistakes and it'll be perfect
makes for brilliant reading =]
x

Poems great, so sad