by dollwithafrown Jun 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Two years ago last Friday, he took to that artist's stage, |
by Jenni Marie
This is so heartbreaking and moving, I liked how you transitioned from happy to sad, it made the poem very powerful. |
by Tricky Daze
I liked your explanations and your reflections of the sad things in life...But on first stanza'S 3rd line the 'and' was useless.. |