I liked your explanations and your reflections of the sad things in life...But on first stanza'S 3rd line the 'and' was useless..
If you erase it I think it would be perfect

Well done
Sincerely,
Laura

This is so heartbreaking and moving, I liked how you transitioned from happy to sad, it made the poem very powerful.
The imagery used in this is beautiful, I could picture it all very clearly, and although it doesn't rhyme, the flow is flawless throughout.