Twenty Years and Two Husbands Ago

by dollwithafrown   Jun 12, 2007


She sat peacefully in her old rocking chair,
Staring deeply into her son's blue eyes,
Finally opening up a window to her past,
Something of which she constantly disguised.

He was kneeling beside her fragile frame,
One hand of hers in his very own,
Wanting her to know how deeply he loved her,
From each little hair, to every delicate bone.

"You can tell me absolutely anything,
I promise you I'll not be surprised.
Please Mother, do not be afraid,
It's all right for me to see your cries."

She smiled wide and a tear fell from her eye,
Feeling ready for her son to know,
So she worked up the courage, began to speak:
"Twenty years and two husbands ago-

As the revelations escaped her mouth,
A new world to her son was shown;
Something so shocking was finally let loose,
Yet she had no idea that he'd already known.

He knew about the man, that he'd called "Dad"
And how by biological standards it was not to be,
Yet although he knew all along about the truth,
His life was not ruptured; he was usually happy.

"It's okay, Mum," he started, "Don't be afraid,
I've known my whole life what was true,
It was so long ago, it no longer matters,
We've got each other, and I love you."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken love that ending, beautiful, simply beautiful.
    I liked how you ended this poem on such a sweet positive note, I found it very touching.
    I enjoyed the word choice and rhyme scheme in this, and the imagery was once again well painted.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Now this was great, I really liked the story you told, the word choice again was amzing, the flow was perfect, the imagery was vivid, the only mistake I found was A knew world to her son was shown;
    knew should be new. Other than that again you have another perfect poem here. keep up the good work 5/5 although I wish i could give you more

  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Yeah that was really sweet. I really like the topic - haven't read something on that topic before. :)

    I like the way you tie up your poems in the end - definitely makes it all wrap up nicely.

    Mo xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Awwww. thats so sweet and sad at the same time. i really like it. 5/5 deffanitely!

    xo kisses xo

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