by dollwithafrown Jun 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She sat peacefully in her old rocking chair, |
by Jenni Marie
I frikken love that ending, beautiful, simply beautiful. |
by Vanessa
Now this was great, I really liked the story you told, the word choice again was amzing, the flow was perfect, the imagery was vivid, the only mistake I found was A knew world to her son was shown; |
by Mo
Yeah that was really sweet. I really like the topic - haven't read something on that topic before. :) |
by xo kisses xo
Awwww. thats so sweet and sad at the same time. i really like it. 5/5 deffanitely! |