This poem was an amazing write that had so many different way to explain how important is,i must say i agree with all of the concept of the poem, this explain that you are a great person, great friend, and great lover.
keep it up dear.

I really enjoyed reading this, the word choice was excellent, the imagery was vivid, the emtion was strong, and the message was clear, the flow was of course flawless, I really loved this, I couldn't think of anything tho improve this, I found no mistakes. perfectly penned. 5/5

Wow! That was amazing. I have always loved formatted poetry, and haven't attempted this style myself as it seems so hard, but you totally did it justice. Great vocab, descriptive words created clear imagery in my mind and the lines you wrote to be repeated were perfect and worked in very well. A touch of a personal side to it too by adding dates and such. I really enjoyed this piece. Reminds me of when I was really young with friends that you just wouldn't let out of your sight. Excellent write. =] 5/5

Tammie

I adore this...this is so beautifully written and such a captivating read.
I love the imagery you portrayed in this, I was smiling whilst reading, the flow is absolutely flawless throughout.
The fact that this is a triolet was an added bonus for me.
beautiful.
Simply perfect.

Very good poem, i never seen someone did a triple triolet before. I did a triolet and it took me forever, so I could imagine you must've put some effort into it. Great job. When you have the chance check out my triolet.