This flowed perfectly and the rhythm, srtucture, layout, it was all perfect. not only did it SOUND good, but it LOOKED good on the page which is really important!! the imagery you conjured in my mind was flawless and descriptions and vocab was also brilliant!
i loved it
well done =]
please could u comment and vote on my latest poem "your subconscious choir" thank you =]

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I love nature poems and I have to say this is the best one I have read in awhile now. Your imagery was great and your word choice was really good as well. You didn't really skip around at all, I love this lol. I'm just blabbing because I was let speechless after reading it.

5.5
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Hmmm... I do feel a bit homesick now after reading that!! :) The imagery was perfect and I could literally see what you were writing.

Brilliant poem - I love reading nature poems - not too good at writing them however! :)

Mo
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A beautiful poem you have here. So descriptive, it created perfect imagery in my mind. Vocab well used, and flow flawless. I like that it didn't rhyme, it really shows that poems don't have to rhyme to be great. A really enjoyable read. Well done, I bet your teacher was amazed. =] 5/5

Tammie

Nicely written.

The peaceful setting brought forth by your pen (and imagination) was wonderfully vivid. The pitch was wistful and emotions relaxing and unruffled. Hardly any nature poems I've read on this site managed to achieve a desirable effect from me than this. I truly enjoyed this piece. Simply beautiful.

Marian