Honest feedback? I felt this poem had really powerful emotions which were expressed in great depth throughout each read. I loved the fact that this poem didn't ryhme it's good to see some people writing well without needing a ryhme to be involved. The flow was good for a non ryhming poem. Definitly something interesting. Well done keep on writing~mel

Yeah this is a total free verse-like. Nevertheless it is well expressed and well penned. The heading metaphorically is cohesive to the content of the poem. Keep it up :)

With love
Fsams