Very good, I really like this poem...sad and dark and true, I've felt this before exactly almost...but yes awesome job check out my poem I just wrote please peace...It's call "Look at what you've become..."
♥Heaven Leigh♥

Actually it's called Look what you've become...I was close lol.

Wow hun thi was dark, so very true though, I love your penning in this and the flow was great! I have felt this way before aswel. great work!

Lucy

It's good. i like how i can relate to it.

That's a good poem.5/5. Flow's good and sound's good!

Wow this was a great poem.. i can really relate to this poem. Keep up the good work!
~M@RY~

Aww cuuute!
my favorite verse:
"I wish youd find your way here
Like you found your way into my heart."

Nice poem... it flowed beautifully
I know how it is to feel that way, actually I wrote a similer poem with the same tittle

I like the the rhythm of the poem... and the tone of it... its corny as it sounds... the "words of love" lol..

I love this poem...its so well written at its exaclty how i feel about being apart from my bf x so much emotion is put into your poems and you can feel it when you read them.
i really enjoyed it x keep it up x 5/5

Thanks for thee comment i like this poem so much!!!! you have very good writting skills keep them up! like it allot!!!

<3tORi

I love this poem it fitss me so well amaziinggg 5/5

Aweh this is really goodd.
& i can relate to it veryy well.
:] gooddjobbb.