Thats beautiful....really powerful and expressive! brilliant!...be a man...be want you want

~maria

That was very nice - and very common for mum's not to let their son's grow up - trying to always protect them from the world. Its good to get your emotions out about it. Good write. I would just suggestion you spell the word "through" instead of "threw" in your poem.

Thanks for the read.

Mo

Wow, that makes me wanna tell Mother a thing or two.Mother doesn't seem to realize, I can do most things haha, but right now I'd still consider me a baby, I need Mother&&Daddy.Honestly, good poem I like the way youu wrote it too.It expresses youu(: