Are you ready?

Very nice, it reminded me of lyrics. I love the visual and you really seem to pour your heart out on this one. To have the courage to do that and to put all of your feelings on paper is something that most writers struggle with becasue theres alaways that fear of rejection in the back of the mind, and that you dont struggle at all with it from what I have read is quite amazing!

my favorite lines were:
this is the begging of something true
i jus want u to think this through?
do u love me?
cuz i love you

so powerfull
5/5

Again, your lack of spelling skills was a bit of a turn off.

Though you quickly made up for it with good rhythme, an easy theme and thyming that seemed to flow easily and simply. NO rhymes were forced and every word seemed to come from the heart.

This was a really extraordinary poem, no faults other than the spelling. But that never really tells you how any work should be written. 5/5 Absolutely.

''are you ready to be my girl?
are u ready to climb da chart?
cuz once we start theres no lookin back
unless you wanna break my heart?''

I adore that stanza, so beautiful.

Now, I didn't like the grammar you used in this, I feel when people write in shorthand it lessens the meaning and content of the poem.
I notice you had a lot of I's in this poem, try taking some of them out, as a lot of the time it makes the flow much better.

Apart from that however, I love it.
The feeling and emotion were there, and it made for a pleasureable read.

I liked this one - I agree with Britt tho with putting a bit of more effort into putting capitals at the beginning of stanzas and things - not knocking the poem - just makes it appear more tantalising to the eye! :)

I hope whoever you wrote this for was appreciative. :) Very sweet.

Mo

I think I'm having a hard time understanding what you're trying to express in this poem. There are several spelling and punctuations are in the wrong place. Try fixing it because I think it would have been better if you took time polishing it.