Hey,
I think it an awesome poem, just one thing please write in normal English like wanna ---> want to, ur ---> your an cuz ---> because, other than that its great, the flow is good and i enjoyed reading it 5/5
kisses stephanie

Aww i just loved the ending it was so adoreable. Overall a very cute and sweet poem, easy to read and lot of emotion in it.
Great writing.
5/5

IT'S REALLY TOUCHING

I really liked this poem although I think the words "baby" & and "hunnie" and so on were all used too much it kind of throws off the sweet emotions which run throughout this and in some way make it seem lustful. You need to capitalize your "I's" and try and not use slang it makes the poem look un-neat and sound weird to read. The meaning in this poem was great none the less with the fix of those basic errors this poem would be quite great. Well done though I did enjoy reading this. ~mel

Awww that was really good poem i can tell you love her a lot. and it seems you put alot of thought to it i think that was a sweet poem it touch my hart,
<3 niki

I think its just an really cute love poem but its kinda been over done i would prefer something new and different in this topic but it was good and i didi like it so good work!

Perfect. That's all. Everything. I have never read a more excellent poem. i really like it. 5/5!!! GREAT job!

Very well written i can see it as a song though but either way great job!!! 5/5

laura

I really liked this poem.. everyone's telling you to take out the "baby" and "honey" and spell out your words.. but everyone has their own style so if thats that way you wanna write, then just write like that.. its your poem.. not theirs.. very nice job.. i really like it and those are important questions that everyone asks when they start a new relationship or fall in love.. excellent job putting it in words and into a poem... nice job .. keep it up =]

I enjoyed this poem. Its really sweet and seems like you put a lot of emotion into this poem. keep up the good work!

Other than all the baby and hunnies it was good, really well written, deep emotion, other than that you should elimate the shortcuts, like wanna should be want to, and cus should be because, it makes the poem seem unprofesional, and hard to follow, other than that excellent job 5/5 and I hope my comments aren't to harsh, i am just trying to help.

I really love it the way you have put down your emotions, it shows a great talent of a poet with a great heart.
you are truly talented, keep it up

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it, keep it up

This one seems a lovely poem and sweet but for me the flow were a little bit because of repeating the same words.. keep it up. still a 5/5

I like it, its good.
against everyone else, i like the honeys and babys, i think it personalises it, puts your emotions across better.
xxxx

I think I'm having a hard time understanding what you're trying to express in this poem. There are several spelling and punctuations are in the wrong place. Try fixing it because I think it would have been better if you took time polishing it.

I liked this one - I agree with Britt tho with putting a bit of more effort into putting capitals at the beginning of stanzas and things - not knocking the poem - just makes it appear more tantalising to the eye! :)

I hope whoever you wrote this for was appreciative. :) Very sweet.

Mo

''are you ready to be my girl?
are u ready to climb da chart?
cuz once we start theres no lookin back
unless you wanna break my heart?''

I adore that stanza, so beautiful.

Now, I didn't like the grammar you used in this, I feel when people write in shorthand it lessens the meaning and content of the poem.
I notice you had a lot of I's in this poem, try taking some of them out, as a lot of the time it makes the flow much better.

Apart from that however, I love it.
The feeling and emotion were there, and it made for a pleasureable read.

Again, your lack of spelling skills was a bit of a turn off.

Though you quickly made up for it with good rhythme, an easy theme and thyming that seemed to flow easily and simply. NO rhymes were forced and every word seemed to come from the heart.

This was a really extraordinary poem, no faults other than the spelling. But that never really tells you how any work should be written. 5/5 Absolutely.

Very nice, it reminded me of lyrics. I love the visual and you really seem to pour your heart out on this one. To have the courage to do that and to put all of your feelings on paper is something that most writers struggle with becasue theres alaways that fear of rejection in the back of the mind, and that you dont struggle at all with it from what I have read is quite amazing!

my favorite lines were:
this is the begging of something true
i jus want u to think this through?
do u love me?
cuz i love you

so powerfull
5/5