by Michael D Nalley Jun 13, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
A proud cock crowed while a duck just quacked |
by Tricky Daze
You created a great masterpiece as you do all the time..I liked the questioning words and questioning the life..It was so meaningful and great |
by Hatori
Wow! Very well writen! Your vocabulary was superior and the flow was excellent. Honestly, I don't see anything to change. I love the aspect of "The creator or the creation", truly a very interesting topic. Outstanding work, keep it up! |
The vocabulary in this poem was fantastic and the flow just the same, the word choice was absolutely perfect to say the least. The last stanza ends the poem very strongly, I especially liked the first 2 lines. Excellent job on a rather short poem 5/5 GG23 |