The vocabulary in this poem was fantastic and the flow just the same, the word choice was absolutely perfect to say the least. The last stanza ends the poem very strongly, I especially liked the first 2 lines. Excellent job on a rather short poem 5/5 GG23

Wow! Very well writen! Your vocabulary was superior and the flow was excellent. Honestly, I don't see anything to change. I love the aspect of "The creator or the creation", truly a very interesting topic. Outstanding work, keep it up!

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

P.S. You can honestly tell in your writing that you are an author, and it is a pleasure to meet another person that writes books.

You created a great masterpiece as you do all the time..I liked the questioning words and questioning the life..It was so meaningful and great
Keep it up,
Laura