My oh my. I LOVE this. From the first stanza until the last, I was so concentrated on this one lol. I didn't want it to end, you are a very talented writer Hun, ;]

"She didn't know where she was going,
This road seemed to go on forever,
She watched the sun kiss the horizon,
And dreamed of the life she wanted."

^^ Those lines were amazing, they really stood out to me. I loved the imagery as well as how strong of a beginning it was.

5.5
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