by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Jun 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Picking Daisies; we layed upon a field of gold, |
by Emma
Wow i loved this. its described so well and has such a nice flow to it. |
by ctmskm
Very Nice. I loved the emotions and flow of this poem. your writing style is usualy mellow and unique. keep it up.. |
Awwww, Such a sad write. Memories of the love gone by. Sometimes we just can't escape what might have been. I loved the referance of bittersweet, how many times have memories haunted me about some place I have been but yet I wouldn't give anything for the memories no matter the lies and hurt I would feel from that moment. Ahhhhh, Touching, beautiful, saddening, yet inspiring. Loved it. |