Ring around the roses
death is so imposing
Burn until your ashes,
Fall onto the ground.
Sick little rhythm
Sick little rhyme.
Burning flesh and eyes,
Until the world has died.
Kill me with your poison
Kiss me once I'm dead.
Burn me with your passion,
The leader must be lead.
Incapable of loving
Your heart has been torn to shreds.
Kill me with your poison.
Kiss me once I'm dead!
Hey,
nice poem, I think that its a great poem, and the flow is perfect too, I like it that you repeat a line: Kiss me once I'm dead!
well I've nothing more to say other that good work! 5/5
kisses stephanie