I love your use of words. really captures it

I loved this. It made me smile. I can't believe more people haven't read and commented on this, I found it very good. I always like to find one specific stanza in a poem that I like, and with this one I kept highlighting each that I read, lol.

"Seeping through your pores,
Slumbering in sweat,
Passion rages in your dreams,
Here heaven can be met."

^^ That one is the one that stuck out to me the most, though. It has strong imagery and your word choice is impeccable. Great job.

5.5
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