I LOVED the way you explained the creature in full detail. Most people would just explain it in a line or two but you dedicated well over half the poem to the explanation, and it worked in your favor. ;] One thing I noticed, though... |
by Vanessa
I feel like I have seen the creature by the way you describe him, your imagery is vivid, the word choice was excellent, This peice is really quite chilling, I enjoyed this as my first read of the day, well written, poem you have here. perfect flow, I couldn't think of anyway to improve this that hasn't already been pointed out. 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I love this...you had me hooked right from the first line and from there on it just kept getting better and better. |