Huh that's weird!! cuz i think our styles are very similar that's why i love reading ur poems. this one was really good. good flow, good rimes. good story.
my favs are:
"I tried so hard, reached so far
but never caught a single star"
"I'm sorry this will hurt, I know it will
But there was a hole that no one could fill"
"Please be strong, just for me
Just be happy that now I'm free
If I become an angel, and you can't stand your ground
Know that I still love you and I'll always be around.. " 5/5

I like this poem its sweet and ya i also like the part when you said :
I tried so hard, reached so far
but never caught a single star!
Thats a good line. 5/5