I loved this poem. I think it does a wonderful job describing the feelings of the 'main character' and then keeps the reader hooked the whole time. My only little bit of advice is in the 2nd to last stanza you said "hears" I believe instead of "tears". If not it could just be a mistake on my part. Anyways, great poem a definate 5/5.

I like it..5/5

Oh thats so sad. But I bet so many people could relate to it! It flowed so well! I really like the first stanza. It really just made me want to read the rest. Keep it up!

~Morgan~