by Stephanie Jun 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Hold on hold on |
by claire
This is such an amazing poem - better than most, and really honest. I love the metaphors you used, about life giving you tea when you want coffee, and making annoying sounds, etc. I also love how you say it will get to be fun - I agree. This poem was down-to-earth, but not pessimistic or anything, which makes it 10x better! keep writing! |