Comments : Hold On

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    This is such an amazing poem - better than most, and really honest. I love the metaphors you used, about life giving you tea when you want coffee, and making annoying sounds, etc. I also love how you say it will get to be fun - I agree. This poem was down-to-earth, but not pessimistic or anything, which makes it 10x better! keep writing!
    ~claire