Hey.
ur poem was really sad and its simlar to what i go threw. to be honest i cried cuz it's like u wrote down all my feelings in ur poem.
anyways hope u answer back my message and maybe we can chat. Bye!!

Hi
Thanks for the comment,
I would love to chat...
It's so good to know that I'm not the only that feels like that...
We're not alone =)
xx

Great write it flows together and shows true sadness and pain i was trapped after the first stanza even though i havent had to experience what your going through and i pray i don't you seem to be strong through it all you are a truly remarkable person and your way with poetry is mesmerizing keep it up kudos to you

Very well written! Flows nicely too!
I felt I just had to comment after I read the end where you put "and no one cares"
NEVER think that! It might seem like no one does, but there's someone, somewhere.
Stay strong, take care xx