Hey,
wow amazing poem, the rhyming and flow are just perfect, my favorite stanzas are the 3th and 6th stanza, you have a great talent and your one of my favorite writers keep up the good work! 5/5
kisses stephanie

Gosh u rily r good n poetry... >_< 5/5

Great poem - you have a nice way of settling the reader into the flow.

5/5

This was really great!
robyn xoxo

Wow, very nice poem. It is sad and i can relate to it.

What a really good poem , your poem structure is very good and your stanzzas are small which make it very easy to read and understand , 9/10