Very cool
I enjoyed the new vibe your sending out
very nice
great work
nicely written
5/5

Wow. I loved this.
I loved the flow.
It was a beautiful poem all around.

You're a great writer.
Keep it up.

5/5.

It started off so happy and then drifted into a bittersweet mood.
You did it perfectly!
It's a case of 'the grass is always greener..' i think =)
5/5
*Gem*

Great poem, well written. keep up the good work 5/5

Awwww, That is the ay i felt once I moved to Dubai from England -.- I was really upset but then I found friend, Really good rythming(sp?) o.0
lol xxxx byebye

Nicely penned. The flow and rhyme were superb, and I relate to the feelings portrayed entirely. Another good piece from you!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

This poem is pretty sad. I liked the structure and rhyming in this peice. There are such strong emotions in this poem, it's not wasy to move from a place you grew up in... Many can relate to the subject.

Great job 5/5