by PygmyPuff Jun 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
When I |
by Nix
Good poem. I enjoyed in every line. You wrote it nicely. It is simple but you created great atmosphere in it. |
A very simple truth and worth investigating. I would save this bit of information to study as it may be a reoccuring theme to acknowledge in the event that you encounter it later. |