Comments : Moving On

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That's so sad. But I love the feeling and the depth to it, it's very good, and how it rythmes, very well done.

    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was very good, the emotionw as pure and deep, and the imagery was great too.
    well done
    xxxx
    you have talent
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Sweet poem. Imagery was really good. Emotions were great, sad write. I specialy loved the last sentence.
    Keep writing!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Now that is a poem that I can relate too. the word choice was simple yet effective, the emotion was deep and heartfelt, really powerful, the flow was flawless, and the message was clear. well done and keep up the great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was really an enjoyable read. The word choice so simple yet so effective holding deep emotion within each word you have written. Heartfelt piece which was capturing and I'm sure so many people can relate to this. Well done ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    I like the end about you beign long gone..its true you just gotta move on..another great poem..your a great writer keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Impulse

    Awww very sad =s... I've no doubt that in the long run you'll move on and put it all behind you

    Well written... and I loved the writing =)

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
    it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
    5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by lynn

    Dame
    that is so sad

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetPinkPrincess

    That is so sad. It reminds me of my exboyfreind
    Smilie

  • 17 years ago

    by lovedxlost

    Youre very talented, what a beautiful (but sad) poem

  • 17 years ago

    by SarahhJayy

    Brilliant , Most People Like Peoms Yjay rhyme This Is Excellent

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonelyangel

    It almost made me cry. it reminded me of my ex and how it took me so lang to get over him and how when he wanted me back i was OVER him. and i mean way over... guys are jerks.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    We all have to move on at sometime
    love the poem n wishu all hte best

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow that was so moving wel done!!! x

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wonderfull poem.
    So sad, full deep emotions.
    Great piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by skye16

    B-e-a-utiful... i like it alot, but i honestly hate how i can relate 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by cAKE

    Aww i love it really emotion filled i felt as i was reading i was thinkin of someone seeing myself sitting wiping away my tears lol its a great 1 keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Beautiful poem, The message sent is clear and loud and written very well. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    I can totally relate! My bf cheated on me with a girl FOUR years older than us. It hurt but I moved on. I really love the flow but next time try to break it off into stanzas. Excellent. 5/5