That's so sad. But I love the feeling and the depth to it, it's very good, and how it rythmes, very well done. |
by Tara Kay
That was very good, the emotionw as pure and deep, and the imagery was great too. |
by Miu
Sweet poem. Imagery was really good. Emotions were great, sad write. I specialy loved the last sentence. |
by Vanessa
Now that is a poem that I can relate too. the word choice was simple yet effective, the emotion was deep and heartfelt, really powerful, the flow was flawless, and the message was clear. well done and keep up the great work 5/5 |
by Melpomene
This poem was really an enjoyable read. The word choice so simple yet so effective holding deep emotion within each word you have written. Heartfelt piece which was capturing and I'm sure so many people can relate to this. Well done ~Mel |
I like the end about you beign long gone..its true you just gotta move on..another great poem..your a great writer keep it up |
by Impulse
Awww very sad =s... I've no doubt that in the long run you'll move on and put it all behind you |
by CHOKE
Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say. |
by lynn
Dame |
That is so sad. It reminds me of my exboyfreind |
by lovedxlost
Youre very talented, what a beautiful (but sad) poem |
by SarahhJayy
Brilliant , Most People Like Peoms Yjay rhyme This Is Excellent |
by Lonelyangel
It almost made me cry. it reminded me of my ex and how it took me so lang to get over him and how when he wanted me back i was OVER him. and i mean way over... guys are jerks. |
by Meme
We all have to move on at sometime |
by lisa
Wow that was so moving wel done!!! x |
by Hebe
Wonderfull poem. |
by skye16
B-e-a-utiful... i like it alot, but i honestly hate how i can relate 5/5 |
by cAKE
Aww i love it really emotion filled i felt as i was reading i was thinkin of someone seeing myself sitting wiping away my tears lol its a great 1 keep up the good work |
by Sarah Ann
Beautiful poem, The message sent is clear and loud and written very well. Keep it up! |
I can totally relate! My bf cheated on me with a girl FOUR years older than us. It hurt but I moved on. I really love the flow but next time try to break it off into stanzas. Excellent. 5/5 |