by lonely lover
This is really well written poem! |
by heather
Im inlove w/ this poem. lol. amazing. ;) |
by Mariselly
Great poem! |
by Birgit
Heey =) |
by Mr M
A bit sad... |
by Lozbi
That was really hard for me to read, so obviously i read it again. tears are flowing from my eyes, because.. just memories and pain i've felt. moving on isnt easy but i dont think i eva thought it would so hard. this poem is simply beautiful, tears are rolling down my cheeks, you did a great job |
I really like the rhyming scheme, and the ending of the poem. |
by Jayden
Great poem! i can completly releate very emotional |
Wow...that is a really deep poem you put a lot of emotion into it and i must say im speechless i know how it feels to get your heart broken and im sorry it happened to you as well...it sucks but this poem was well really really good |
by Raven
Very Very good. |
Its not that much sad.... yet the feelings are better. a prettyg good one... |
B-e-a-u-t-f-u-l writing yet again |
B-e-a-u-t-f-u-l writing yet again |
Hiya iv only just joined the site id love u to check out my poems and see what u think maybe giv me sum advice bcoz urs are really gd! thnx x x x |
So sad=( but i really really like it! |