Comments : Moving On

  • 17 years ago

    by lonely lover

    This is really well written poem!
    good job! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Im inlove w/ this poem. lol. amazing. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mariselly

    Great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Heey =)

    Really nice poem =]] the rhyme in it is so good and I can really picture you in front of me.. Sitting like that.. =( Well.. keep strong.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    A bit sad...

  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    That was really hard for me to read, so obviously i read it again. tears are flowing from my eyes, because.. just memories and pain i've felt. moving on isnt easy but i dont think i eva thought it would so hard. this poem is simply beautiful, tears are rolling down my cheeks, you did a great job
    5/5 + this poem in my faves
    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really like the rhyming scheme, and the ending of the poem.
    Emotions are well expressed.
    5/5, good one

  • 17 years ago

    by Jayden

    Great poem! i can completly releate very emotional

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...that is a really deep poem you put a lot of emotion into it and i must say im speechless i know how it feels to get your heart broken and im sorry it happened to you as well...it sucks but this poem was well really really good
    keep up the amazing writing <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Raven

    Very Very good.
    I dont understand why your rating is so low.
    But this is a very true poem.
    Love it!

    5/5

    ♥Mz.Raven

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its not that much sad.... yet the feelings are better. a prettyg good one...

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by jennifer leigh

    B-e-a-u-t-f-u-l writing yet again
    dont worry, he will realise wha he had with you and regret it
    so keep smiling and remember there are plenty more out there
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by jennifer leigh

    B-e-a-u-t-f-u-l writing yet again
    dont worry, he will realise wha he had with you and regret it
    so keep smiling and remember there are plenty more out there
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by april tinsley

    Hiya iv only just joined the site id love u to check out my poems and see what u think maybe giv me sum advice bcoz urs are really gd! thnx x x x

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    So sad=( but i really really like it!