Sorry if the poem's not too good...its really the first one i've written...please comment though

I think it was pretty good myself ,but there are other ways of dealing with life, you may be pone that just thinks you have it rough, all in all the poem was great. You did a wonderful job on it, but it would look better to the reader if you drop the extras like this line:�Will I really be so bold?�
Will I really be so bold, would make it look a lot better, 5/5 great job. it's not always the best poem that gets the vote or comment, it's the effect you put into it.As long as it comes from the heart , be happy.

Well the letters beside the saying Will i really be so bold shouldn't have been there...i dunno what happened really, but i am gonna fix it

Cassie-love! I love your darkside. It's absolutely beautiful, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.